Another very deep poem. I liked it alot. Another 5/5. Definitely keep up the good work:)

I like this poem.
Especially this part alone
Something so morbidly obscene
I love your wording
Although when using sometimes
You could use synonyms so
You wouldn't have to repeat the same word.
Otherwise.
It's great :]

Terrific poem! Great wording! Keep it up! :)

Your poems are so elaborate and amazing.