Comments : Solid Liquid and Gas

  • 17 years ago

    by Jason Rainey

    A tad strange, be it in an intriguing sort of way. Probably deeper than my brain will allow. A little insight from you could help that. I like it, I will read it more to try and further find the meaning.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kim

    Haha this was so much fun to read. Such an orginal idea and highly creative, great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Corinne

    "W(h)ere amoeba grow and stew" :-)

    The last verse is my favorite

  • 17 years ago

    by Bogie

    I want to thank Corinne for giving
    me the word that makes the last
    line work much better then what
    I had used.
    Thank you sweetie and write on,
    Bogie

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa

    Just beautiful... You are incredible at rhyming, one of my faves for sure...