That was such a heart wrenching story.
Once again, the rhythm was amazing, it kept the poem flowing like water as i read and the way you've written is so vivid, the reader can almost see the characters acting out the poem before them.
Very talented
5/5
*Gem*

Jenna!!!! Ah! I wanna cry... *tears* I actually did... Hun, what a sad poem! I had to stop myself from reading your other one for my contest... a few of them are for that.... darn!!! lol You are an amazing writer ((I saw you diss yourself on the discussion board)) so don't ever change hun! Stick by what you love to do! love ya!!! <33