Abysse = abyss
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Your poems are incredible. Although they would be much better with grammar and capitalization, they stun me how addictive they are. I seem to love your poems... So simple, yet powerful. You have an ability. Once I get you to write poems with grammar and capitalization, you will be on your way.

Great job.
5/5
~Stephen White

Much better, m'dear.

5/5
~Stephen White

It is raw it is painful it is real, that makes it good, its not over worked its just how you felt, i like this one alo0t, and check out my poem changes, its like this one, i just threw the words on the screen and i liked it, yours is great keep at it,
nessa