Really emotional and deeply touching. your words are really strong and you structured it well. definately a beautiful, but truely moving and sad poem too. keep it up! xXx

Really Really Good
I loved it
but i hope you Feel Better
<3

Topic is interesting and this poem is very original. Very effective ending. This piece is short but still very powerful. I like the atmosphere that you created with just a few words. 5/5

Nice poem.
Very true.
Enjoyed reading it.
Take care