Despite what you think. it was actually pretty good. keep up the good work.

Aww it didn't suck!:) Very good thoughts to it! original :) Very good poem! I like it!

This does not suck, it is actually really beautiful, especially because some people really do believe this is true. the flow isn't all that perfect, but the description is really true and amazing. so 5/5
thx for the comment
gabriella

I like this poem.
thank you for commenting mine,( it is done now!)

Interesting way to look at good and evil perhaps?...nicely done Andrew. All the best, Debbie

Hey that was a good poem

I liked it. Why put yourself down, and say that it sucked. It is very well done. 5/5 thanx for commenting mine.

Ah another perfect poem. you do know how to write. well done. and so many great comments and votes. well done on this great acchievment and success.

5/5 David

Writing from another persons view is the most difficult thing to accomplish. It is harder than one can imagine to view things from a different perspective then what we are used to.

The flow was off a litte, but keep practicing this new found method of yours and in time you will be writing from different views like it was second nature.

--Sher

I must say this was well written. As Sherry has stated, writing from another persons view is hard and difficult to persue. Great job, keep up the wonderful work.

Peace, Joe

Great poem, I guess we all tend to have a dark side at sometime in our life. But some day you will choose to come out of the shadows

GR8 Andrew!!

The shades and contrast discussed and portrayed are speaking truth........good expressions!!!

well done
Superna

This didnt suck, I liked it. And like someone said up there its hard to write from another persons point of view, I actually like to do that. Anyways well done. 5/5

I'm a very honest critique so im sorry if anything i say is harsh but just a few pointers :)

You have some very creative ideas that I do like keep them coming they will make great poems.

I'm not all into non-rhyming poems to be honest I find them hard to read and hard to follow.

Only change your style for you though if u liek it then dont change.

That was amazing. i really loved it
thank you for the comment by the way
:) your very talented

It didn't suck! I really loved it. Thanks for the comment and the vote. I hate animal killers also. They always think they are better than anything else and they always take advantages.

Cool =) 5/5 ^^