Awww. this was so perfect. you are improving with each poem. the ending i thought was great! yet the start of the last line in this poem did not make sense.

you'll laugh for once, now wat are you trying to say here?

5/5 anyway. David

So just as the water drips into the ocean,
a cup brimming with emotion.
as the abandoned roosters crow,
you'll smile so sad, as your tears fall slow

Hi Gabriella,

Wow, this poem is beautiful. I especially like way the words flow in the lines above.

there is no advice I can give you as your knowledge and depth supasses my own, just keep feeling and writing from the heart and your poetry will always be true. xxx

You tackled reality here and it worked well :D
xxx alex xxx

I like the way that this poem thros in realtiy and smacks it in your face lol. It was really good, again some strong words used here.

xxx alex xxx

Honestly I don't like it, I won't rate it... I don't know, it isn't really deep and you could write it better.