Comments : My Lover

  • 17 years ago

    by Kurt

    The last stanza was flippin' brilliant. The poem flowed smoothly and wasn't hindered much and then BAM! the last stanza just hits the reader hard. Great write.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Overwhelmed with happiness,
    That you bring to my heart,
    I fell in love with you,
    Right from the start."

    Such a beautiful piece sweets.
    Short, simple and chock full of love =)
    Love it!
    5/5
    *gem*