*Tear*

Thankyou for your comment laura...i really like this poem - the idea of speaking to your heart as if it was a child that had fallen down and hurt itself. and the undercurrent of self-recovery. very interesting well done
Chloe Cain

Great poem, and you will get better, im trying as well

Oh gosh...
This is very orignial and unqiue in concept, and made for a refreshing read.
The opening really pulled me in and from there on it gets better and better.
I thought this was very moving and heartwrenching at the same time, but I liked how you ended on a positive note.