LOL I know this feeling all too well. I face it daily. Thanks for the little laughter and letting me know that I am not alone in this world of "Oh My"..

A little tiny suggestion babe, in the very fist line it would sound better if you removed the word "a" and let it read
"I can't write poetry"

Just a suggestion, but hey it could also be me.

--Sher

That made me laugh, you can write, it was awsome 5/5

Ah well done. i love how it all was described. excellent in fact!

5/5 David

Haha certainly is a random poem, but that's what makes it so unique, keep it up 5/5.

Well done and you can write I have been reading some of your others and very much enjoyed the read.Take care.

This is so cute, haha adorable!

Hey,
so cute and unique, i really enjoyed reading this one =)
good work.
kisses Stephanie

Well I dont really understand the last line maybe it just went over my head im not quite for sure. But the rest was cool I love how people write poems about not being able to write poems it shows talent nice work!

Excellent poem, i found it very creative. It had a flawless flow and it grasped the reader's attention from the beginning to the end, well done.

Wow thanks u make me smile hehehe... i really enjoyed.. keep it up and hope u can write more and more.. and the more u write the more better and better so keep on writing....

its me,
sweet lig

Lol yer, a urm... different approach lol, i actuallyl iked it. Not some scary sad poem but funny i feel :D

xxx alex xxx

Nice I have never heard a poem like this it turned out spectacular!!!

It would appear that you can write poems very well. Haha. I fancy this poem. (I adore the word 'fancy'.) XD

5/5