Very moving, yet extremely dark and sad. I loved this. you did a great job. well penned and excellent flow. I believe 5/5 is in order.

Lovely message! 5/5

Amazing. The imagery was clear. I could see it all in my mind.
And the flow was great.

'Frustrated This man
broke loose inside.
He couldn't speak with
all the emotions he tried to hide.'

Loved it.

Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

Wow, this is strange. I wrote a poem called 'The Stranger' as well, and it sort of dealt with the same situation. You had the guy breaking down and he became a stranger to himself. In my poem, I had the guy calling the girl a stranger because she cheated on him. Anyways, this was a great poem!