This is a very good and sweet poem brianna, the flow is perfect, i give it a 5/5!!! keep up the good work!!!

Excellent poem for your friend she will enjoy it I know I did

Really nice Brianna I really liked this!!
It was a great dedication poem.
and i think your friend Anna will love it just as much as I did

Very good poem and very touching :)

ashleigh

I rerally love the way this made me feel youthful with the innocense you conveyed in your metaphor. Well Done.