Great job. It seems like there's something missing at the end, but it is still very well written.

This is the only err:

"An see the light of another day as it should be."
= (sp)
"And see the light of another day as it should be."

Other than that, nice word use. I should start using the word revile in my poems. I forgot it existed.

5/5
~Stephen White

(please check out my new poem, IT (Part 1) if you would like.)

Peace!

A sinister portrayal of self - abuse and nostalgia i enjoyed the concept of the night as a focul point of your pain but aswell your clarity in a sence great work

I like the imagery, and the thought of night and your dark pains, a great way to put it,
nessa