Comments : My First Time

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Freedom...yeah...the feeling i get after reading this one is to just grab a bike and ride on a highway (without helmet) .. :o) but then i will end up paying cops.. :o)

    loved this one...its really very beautifully written...great poem indeed

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Beautiful feelings in this one Cindy! Can feel the wind in my hair and see the open road...

    Your first free verse poem is so well done Cindy....good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Corinne

    Whoo - is it hot in here - or is it me? I loved the double entendre of the piece. Well done Cindy :-)

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Hmmm cindy welldone. Intresting.

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryan

    Very creative piece cindy, i think this is the first non rhyme poem ive seen u write. it takes a good writer to switch styles like that and do so good, i give it a 5/5!!

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Well i bet you would have won the contest. this poem was so insighting. well done.

    5/5 David

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Finally got the motorcycle challenge huh?
    You did a good job and it could have a double meaning (ha ha). Nicely done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    Hmm Cindy, i can see what your trying to say and also what you're not saying, lol
    But seriously, coming from someone who is rubbish at free verse and probably has no idea what they're talking about, just let me say this.
    Outstanding =)
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Another stupendous poem by you, Ms. Cindy. I actually had no idea what your writing about, I dare say. But as I finished reading this delightful write, I was grinning widely. I'm delightfully impressed. =]
    'Twas a terrific ride, ne?
    Love,
    Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by carissalynn

    Awsome!

  • 16 years ago

    by Milo

    This poem is awesome keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellently written, a real work of art, keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lithium

    This is really different from alot of your work, but still written with the utmost perfection, well done cindy.

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    "My hands itching to open your throttle"

    thats an amazing line right there...leaves everything to the imagination, can mean many different things..thats true talent right there

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent write Cindy proud of you on this one
    Scared yet excitement taking over
    My hands itching to open your throttle
    nice flow and great wording ,great job~~~~5/5
    your friend Tracy