Yeh I really like this one. The feeling is really strong expressed and is really easy to see. I like it, it's really good.

O wow i really do like this poem a lot it expreesss true feelings for sumbody i mean like most ppl say that when ur so young u can love somebody...but u kno what u can love sumbody even if ur like only like 10 years old...ya see what im saying...i mean they say u love ur family...n u say u love ur parents....then y can u love somebody else when ur only a teen ager....ne thing can happen n i hate when ppl say that ur too young...cuz ur NEVER too tyoung to love