Awww... that makes me want to give you a BIG hug.

My friend's going through the same thing *scowls*

Great writing! >.<

It's a good one... I like the style.

Hi melissa!

First i want to say, very good poem (first i've read of yours) it seems like a web of emotions trying to stay in and escape a relationship at the same time. i've felt that way many times before. Also, i want to thank you for all the wonderfulllll comments on my poems, it made my day. I'll read more of yours because you sound like a wonderful poet yourself.

Very Beautiful poem...just loved it!...it's superb!...well penned!
Tk care!
~Pooja~

This is a good poem!! I have one suggestion at:
"as I lye asleep,"
isn't lye spelled lie??[i'm not sure??].
nice job.
peace

I love this poem!!! for some reason i cant get into writting anymore... but i love thiss !!! 5/5