Hey great poem! hey anwayz my poem i can do better it wasn't intended to sound like a song i was a little heartbroken because i just found out my boyfriend has been cheating on me & i'm on the verge of breaking up wit him.
so i took my anger out in this poem, you probably can tell, cause there's some cuss words in it. so i guess it does sound like a song but it isn't.

I appreciate your comment! More than you know! You write some great works, too! 5/5