I love your pome! its really sad but you showed the emotion really well

What a nice poem .. so sad ... it's great ,,,

Good job,. keep it up

Aww.. omg!.. wow.. hope that's not your story hun and its imagination because the poems extrodinary bt the feelins are so sad.. mail if u need to tlk to anyone, i'd b happy to help, sometimes it's easier to talk to strangers X

Amazing, ur emotions are so strong in poetry its a great way to release your emotions also need someone to talk to im here im one year younger but ive been through alot so talk to me if you want

I loved this poem!!
5/5 definitly!
great work