This is a nice poem =] Short but strong! I liked it.

xxx

Wow.....just amazing, one of the best poems i have read in a little while!!! utterly faultless and magical and sad....beautiful

---tara

V mournful poem with lovely words n lucid meanings. I can understand u r goin through a lot of pain. God bles u n ur beautiful work. great 5/5
with love
Fsams

Awww i lyk diz poem of urs.. i agreed 2 wat birgit said.. itz short but strong! :)

I LOVE THIS ONE!!! CAN U CHECK SME OF MINE OUT PLZ!!!

Oh my gosh.. you've got me in tears.. lol..? well done hun its just brilliant!! can totally relate to it X

Nice poem/ Short but soo strong