Wow, this was an amazing poet
1, the meaning of the poem really touched me, how well you have described your pain and feelings. great job dear.
2, this is my first time reading this style which i think is great. the amazing part of this style was, how you did it that much emotions and feelings into it.

wow you are a great writer.

Another Excellent Piece! You have wonderful Talent, its great you explained the layout of your poem as well, i only enjoy writing them lol Iv never had experience with the types of poems. Another 5/5

Wow, such powerful words used in this poem.
I've never attempted much formed poetry, I don't think I could do a restricted rhyme scheme like that. So good job for doing that!

Wow this poem was amazing. I loved it. The wording was perfect and it kept you interested. Keep up the good work. 5/5

Short, simple, straight to the point and a little bit sad. I liked it a lot. It's always nice to see a new style as well. Rather simple, but new to me, and therefore made me interested.

Nice work.

So much meaning in so lil space... Enjoyed it really! Amazing poem and i have never read anything like this before :) Amazing poem! Keep up the great work :)

I haven't ever read this style before, i don't think. But it was well written ,and full of emtion. I think you did an excellent job 5/5

That was very good! Very strong! Like I always say, the shorter the poem, the stronger it should be.

-Liz-
5/5

This was wonderfully written and had alot of meaning put into it. i havnt seen many poems like this before.

This was beautifully written.
My favourite part was the last line, that really stood out to me.
I enjoyed the wording, and the flow was perfect.
You did a wonderful job with this style.