Moral of the story, drugs and girls are evil. Lol, very well written my friend, there was a lot of tense emotions in this one. It seemed liek a very cold tone, like you didn't care about the other person in the end.

That is so well written. I was excited to read each new stanza. I loved it. Well done. Xx Chrissie

Gah. Seriously, I love how well the emotions from your poetry just flows out to readers and wacks them straight in the face! It's so strong. It makes me love it so much more.

Excellent.