Haha! Talk about a poem reminding you of fall out boy :]

''Wouldn't piss on fire to put you out
You've lost me now for good
Take a long walk off short pier
I'd push you if I could

I need you in my life like a
Hole going through my head
Instead of burning bridges
Why not drive off them instead''

Ohhh those lines made me giggle. A lot. Hahaha
I love this!
I can feel the anger radiating from this, and yet it was still such a good read.
Screw the fake friends!

Gem
Great job! Sure wouldn't want to make you my enemy.

Wouldn't piss on fire to put you out
You've lost me now for good
Take a long walk off short pier
I'd push you if I could

You did a great job expressing your anger.
Take care love Cindy

Wouldn't piss on fire to put you out
You've lost me now for good
Take a long walk off short pier
I'd push you if I could
^^^
Gem I loved this stanza. Oh how I've dreamed of doing the last line to a few deserving
people .... lol
Tell it like it is girly ....
Release that voice hunny and let those words flow ..... woot woot

Awesome read Gem serious, yet made me giggle on the second stanza ...
Well done Gem ... well done

Wow that was a great poem and you put your thoughts + feelings out there great. I hope this person feels the loss of an amazing person since she lost a great friend for a reason.
5/5
lots of love
Chelsea

ps. Yes I do know your story and its nice to have someone that can relate in that certain way. i am here for you whenever

Good Heavens! Ma'dear, are you all right?

"Wouldn't piss on fire to put you out
You've lost me now for good
Take a long walk off short pier
I'd push you if I could"

^ Reading that stanza made me gulped. Heh. I could feel your fiery emotions blazing throughout. A wicked joy to read. Keep them coming! Love, Debbie

I like this one.

"I need you in my life like a
Hole going through my head
Instead of burning bridges
Why not drive off them instead''

That's funny!

Sounds like you wrote this for me to my ex...lol .....love it!

Wouldn't piss on fire to put you out
You've lost me now for good
Take a long walk off short pier
I'd push you if I could

^ Great lines! Well done! 5/5 Debbie

Hahaha! I've never read anything like this before. And I loved it! Talk about "cutting the tension"...wow! That was really powerful, and in a some-what funny way, :)! Thanks for the good read!
~Midnight Sun

Ha, well this is different lol. I really liked this one. The emotion was fierce and made for a very powerful piece. Great read. 5/5

marcella

Love this. Very relateable for a lot of readers I`m sure, and also a good way for you to vent. Great job, the imagery was amazing.

5.5
:]

Nice!
love it
10/5