I have a cat too and I can relate.

Real cute i loved it :D

For such a short poem there needs to be more virbrance and life so it stands out and apart from the rest.

{4/5}

[PygmyPuff]

That was cute. I love cats too, but it was a little too short for me. It just seems like there should be more to it than that. But its still a good write. 4/5

Wow, that was quite short, i dont know about other people but i think that it is an amazing piece, it seemed to just connect in those few words, sometimes, the things you dont say, are more powerful than what you do say, so well done... 5/5

I liked this one, I have a cat myself and I know the feeling that you get when they sit on ur lap look up at you with their half closed eyes and let out they magical pur. I agree with everyone though it was a bit to short. It just seemed to end for me, I think that you should either make this poem a little bit longer, or you should change some of the words and add more metaphores and it would be much better. But a very good start you have there.

Aww cute! <3 Haiku's are wonderful types of poetry aren't they? And this one was great!!!

good job!!!

--**Skye~