This is my most recent poem and whether it's good or not (which personally I believe that it is), it's from the heart and that's all I care about...Me and my boyfriend just broke up & it was a complicated relationship. But, I did do all that I knew to do to keep us together but he put forth no effort so, I finally just said, "you know what...it's over...4 good!" ***Sorry, it's probably TMI but, I felt I needed to explain why I wrote the poem!***
~Kayla~

That is an outstanding poem. youve lt out your true felings and many people can relate to it in different ways. Bloody awsm!!!

Thanks joanne! Means alot! G2R!
~Kayla~

I love this!
I enjoyed how you swapped from yes to know all the way throughout the poem.
The flow was good throughout, the emotion shines through the words and I liked how the ending was positive.

This is very good. i give it 5/5. :D

Thank y'all so much!
~Kayla~

Thanks...again! You must really be likin' my stuff!
~Kayla

You go girl!