Awww this was really good, but i felt like you kept repeating yourself over and over, although i really like what the poem is about. so good job. 5/5

~Kristina

This is quite delightful to read. It almost seems similar to a formal piece of Parquet, whereas it differs from its customary use of line metre and so on... Anyway, 'tis something I can correlate with. I've always adored someone in life for five years now. =] Hope you all the best! And, oh, it is a sweet poem!

A very sweet poem.
Good rhyming and flow.
Well done

I dont think you reapeted yourself but even so its a great poem i wouldnt change a thing 5/5