by Crystal Gaze
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Amazing kaia! |
by lina
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Kool and very interesting poem |
by Chad Picard
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Beautiful. :) |
by Louis
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You used repetitions but the flow of the repeated stanza good enough that it was bearable. I think the third verse of the second stanza doesn't quite fit, it is a repetition of the first verse, and nowhere in the poem are there repeated verses in the same stanza. Pleasant nonetheless. 3/3 |