This is close to the story. Very well written. A happy vision to look forward to her prince coming for her

It was very simple but very clear. It fits with the stroy perfectly. Nice thing to think about too.

It is interesting and unique to turn a classic fairytale into a poem without making up most of it. Very nice. Some of the stanzas like the third to last goes off rhythm.

I enjoyed reading this vivid retelling of the story.

Good Job!

However, I have a few issues with the scansion and rhyme scheme of the poem. On several lines some words don't really fit in. I'd suggest you go back and read through it again out loud, or get a friend to do it for you.

But all in all I enjoyed this very much. It was sweet and made me smile :)

Aaah to be cinderella (:

Best Regards

Sondos

Oooh, classic. It's good for what it is... a beautiful story. Yup. nicely done.

But... out of curiousity, don't you think writing your own fiction is more...fulfilling than re-writing someone else's?
I mean no offence.
Happy writing-

I thought that you did a good job while reading it the story while similar it felt different too and i liked that

you did a nice spinoff to my fav fairytale

I think you did a great job turninng it from a story into a poem. you didnt leave out any of the good bits of the book.

well done 5/5

Such a little sweet poem, you made the tone serious which is hard to do on such a childs stroy well done.

xxx alex xxx

It was okay.
It wasn't the best I've read out of you.
But it also wasn't the worst I've read
Out of this whole site.
This stanza...

Her step-mum
Doesn't care for her
Nor does her step-sisters
They make her cater

It kind of seemed forced.
Other than that, I love the simplicity
Of your words.
5/5 m'dear :]