Comments : The kiss [Acrostic]

  • 17 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Very nicely written. I like the words and how they all fit together so nicely.

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    The first stanza started off the poem in a enchanting way. But the rain part just hits right on the mark. Wonderful job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelsea

    Its sweet :]. I don't really know how much I can say about this one-its really hard to change an acrostic poem, obviously. But, It is better than any acrostic I have ever done XD Good job

  • 17 years ago

    by Faded

    Very good job, i usually dont like acroustic poems, but this one was pretty good,

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    The words fit togather very well. You did an excellent job. Keep up the good work. The Imagery was great, and the words well chosen 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    No wonder I chose this as my winner.
    It is fabulous :]
    From something simple as acrostic.
    You made it into something I just could not forget.
    Sometimes I found myself saying the words
    Out loud.
    It was a bit ludacris, but funny all in all.
    5/5 m'dear :]