You have a way of REALLY bringing the reader in near the end of your poems, it amazes me. This is the same as your other one, I didn't think I'd like it much, but at the end I LOVED it. It was very inspirational, and I love that in poems. =)

"Leave the past as just an echo,"

^^ That line, wow! I don't even know how to say it but I really loved that line, there was something about it..it's stuck in my head now haha. Great job Dear.

5.5

The last stanza is my favorite. Its something we should all strive to live by.