This is really good :)

I think on the first line
You spelled staring wrong.
The thing you spelt out sounds like
Star-ring.
You're trying to say stare-ring, right?
But still.
This is an awesome poem.
I wish I could give any other advise on it.
But I like this poem too much
And don't want anything dramatic to change.
Other than that.
5/5?

I like it sis but its a 5/5
She is right you spelled words wrong but I cant spell either
ttyl'

I like it sis but its a 5/5
She is right you spelled words wrong but I cant spell either
ttyl'

Very good.