Comments : A Broken Soul Just Watching From the Sidelines

  • 17 years ago

    by DiiChan

    This is a nice poem. I can really relate to this. Good job! ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    This one really great i mean it it was so lonely i can feel the sadness in each lines and stanzas, similar to my feeling. GREAT WORK!!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by reJoyce

    This is a wonderful write. great ending that reminded me of my own "beyond compare" piece. dont hesitate to check it out and keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kenny

    This moved me, I understand where you were when you wrote it. I pray you have found your worth, you are everything to you! Great work....Find your smile!!