Similar style to your other poems... That's not a bad thing.. i just like seeing how different people write.

good work... keep up the writing...

So sweet i love writing poems about my baby wve been together two years today :D i love love lol :D

xxx alex xxx

It reminds me of an old saying which goes, "Do not linger in the past and worry about the future too much. The past is over; the future is still uncertain. Live in the present, because it is a gift..." I was rather delighted in reading this piece -- it's adorable, indeed! I think we do have our worries and whatnots about what will happen in the future. But, even then, everything will be just fine. =] Beautiful work, nonetheless. all the best and take care. 5/5 ~Marian

Very nice form and metric feet...good flow. I liked this very much

Aww that sucks. I'm sorry he broke your heart. Not trying to change your mind or nothing but you know what they say. Break me once shame on you break me twice shame on me..5/5
-vino

I read a couple of your poems and they are all great, youve got a real talent=]