This is another good piece of work, i really like the way you used repetition throughout your poem good job xxx alex xxx

Another good piece from u...GREAT
5/5

GOd bless u

Hassan
What a good job you have done on this poem. I really liked the way you have yoused the two differences of what I lost and what I found.

In your love what I lost and found
I have found the fears to see
you with someone And the pain to i
imagine this truth I have lost myself
by trying to find you

Very sad ending.
Take Care Cindy

In your love... u'd really express ur true feelings! in your love it has a deeply feelings..hmmm,, i was carried away the line that u keep on reapeting it such a great sructure of poet.