Ive found that your poetry varies from good to exellent, this is one of your better pieces i reallyl iked the way i can grasp the strucuter of your poem well done keep up the good work xxx alex xxx

Thts sad one..but greatly expressed...
5/5
God bless u

Very deep emotions run through this poem.
It reminds me of darkness.

Briefly you are responsible
for every thing
that I suffered in your love

Very sad. Hope things brighten up in your life
Take Care Cindy

So nice u touch my heart its really sweet and sad poet.. i love the whole message,all the message are truly touch everyones heart.actually i can truly relate so i can say this was great for me and thanks for sharing

god bless!

You really express well how one person can have so much affect on the life of another. We can't go through life thinking that we don't leave footprints where ever we go. Beautiful poem!
Loving Always-Erin

Love it! It is beautiful!!! Really it is beautiful...

Nazeer

Wow, Great immotioal expression....:)