I like it except it doesnt seem really finished ... the ending is really indecisive, and sorry but me personally i hate it when thigns arent finished lol but everything in it was really good

Very nicely written. This particular piece I can relate to. Most of my poems are like this. Keep up the writing!

Very very sad one.. nice words choose.. could feel pain in it... Amazing write. :)

As always, you did a fantastic job on this poem. You're a wonderful writer, and I just love reading your stuff, nice flow, and very powerful, keep it up. =) 5/5 of course!
-Ally

Cool poem. It was great. It has a nice flow and you used just the right words. I loved it keep up the good work:) 5 out of 5

Perhaps not as good as some of your other work but still a good write oyu have a skill that i rarely see on this website.

xxx alex xxx

Aww poor thing I can relate to this one it's really good and I loved it very nice imagery and emotion

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You spelled it wrong. Well, these aren't easy to do. You did a good job on it. The flow was a bit shaky, and the rhymed seemed a bit foreced. Keep up the work! God bless 5/5
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Wow this is amazing. i really liked it a lot. you did a wonderful job writing this. it was sad, but greatly written 5/5

~Kristina

Oh whoa! this was very dramatic. it was excellent. i loved how it ended so strongly. that always impresses me. a strong ending. and this poem showed that.

well done and keep writing. 5/5 David