Comments : When Our Hearts Are Near

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Ben
    What a beautiful confession of love. Your words create such pictures in my mind. Imagery is excellent.

    So to my soul mate whose charming grace
    I hold most dear.
    My life exists to hold you close and is completed
    when our hearts are near.

    Loved your closing stanza. How heart warming. To see a happy love poem.
    Take Care Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    What a beautiful dedication of love....romantic...touching...you two are lucky to have found each other...All the best to you both, Love, Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow, this is so wonderful indeed. I am sure she is worth many more poems like this and only you could write them.
    Great poem indeed, loved it

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    You are my angel sent from God,
    to lift away my cares....
    Those are my favorite lines.
    The poem is beautiful. You are just as talented as your mom!

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid