Showed real emotions and so touching..but i have to say about a thing that breaks the flow scheme

Don't turn back
you might see
the thousandth tear fall, and you might
hear my footsteps echo in the night.

My suggestion for you is to make lines length almost similar..cos it affects flow so much
Other than that a really good masterpiece
Keep it up
Sincerely,
Laura

This was an excellent poem. Keep up the good work. ^.^ *5/5*

Alyson