Really showed feelings and emotions in this one..but i have a couple of things that would make it perfect...

At the first stanza in my opinion is too repetitive,putting some words there or it's beacuse the (I'm)s

And the second thing is that
Regardless of what I've done:Regardless of what i have done
Because you have enough space to do it..and will make it flow better

I hope you don't misunderstand me
I just tried to help you
Other than that it's a really fine masterpiece
Keep it up
Sincerely,
Laura

Great job this is really good 5/5

Never apologize for who you are!

I enjoyed the poem, and know the meaning you were trying to portray, but when I read it the second time, I think it might have more impact if changed to exclude "sorry" and substitute with a different emotion. Otherwise, nice job ... I'll read a few more now. :)