I saw this in a contest and i asked to myself,why don't i have a look at my hun's new poems
And i can see that's really from your heart
Keep it up
Sincerely,
Laura

I liked this poem.. when a friend decides to move on its very hard to deal with because they end up taking a part of you that you thought they would keep forever. And it makes you feel used and rejected. But dont worry cause real friends never leave you alone, and in time this so called friend of yours will be a distant memory. I really liked how you made this topic without sounding bitter or angry just sad and hurt. nice work.

Real good poem love. I love the way its set out really well. You expressed your feelings really well here :D

xx alex xxx

Aww, this was sad. It's never good when friendships turn sour, but you handled this poem really well. The emotion was clearly well expressed. I enjoyed reading very much.

Wow. This poem speaks very truly of the emotions you go through when you lose someone you care about. It seems that the world is crumbling down around you and are lost and confused. This poem flows well and rocks!! 5/5!

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

This was a very good poem , the sadness of losing friends sometimes hurts more than anything, it's hard to deal with at times ,. but we learn to move on and make new ones if we can, wonderful write and s pleasure to read , keep it up , your friend Tracy d..............5/5