This is not terrble. This is good! Seems it came out straight from the heart... Very emotional and touchy... It's a good write!

Venting sometimes exposes our deepest feelings. You certainly expressed deep love here. Very well done.

Wow, I can relate to this whole poem in so many different ways. This was an excellently written poem. Great Job!!!

Peace, Joe

Beautiful poem. It flowed, it was resonating, truthful, heartfelt and powerful. For a "just venting poem" you did wonderful at doing just that in a manner that was both intriguing and wonderful.

Great job,
5/5
~Stephen White

(Grammar, Punctuation, and it seems even syllabication were perfect =] Well done.)

This definitely isn't terrible. It maybe isn't your best, but as usual, it was a pleasure to read. I hope things get better soon, and obviously the emotions expressed in this poem were not the happiest. :P

:]

Lol...this one is no where near terrible...but it's so close to perfect!=)
Beautiful poem...filled with emotions expressed in a simple way...so touching...u portrayed your emetions well thru this one...good work hun!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

I wouldent say its amizing but its not bad so i give it a good 4/5

Pretty good..the ending seemed to come to quick and not really "end" the poem...You know what I mean?? You did paint a picture in my mind with this one though..4/5

Dear its not terrible its so simple and conveying the intended meaning. Thank you for adding my poem to your favourites. tc

Don't punish me for this love,
My feelings for you will not go away

aaah i loved these lines allot. the poems was realy well written. thefeelings and emotions were strong. it make me awesome.
i will must give you 5/5

take care
your friend

Really so beautyful with sweet emotions..... Really i enjoyed. GOOD....:)

I love this. A little confusing at times but nothing too bad. Very bittersweet.

5.5
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