On the last line.
You spelled met wrong.
You spelled it like meght
Or something like that.
But otherwise.
It's pretty good.
The format's not gorgous.
But I'll give it a 4 :]

Good poem. Sad too.

You spelled legs wrong too.

I thought it was a good poem overall, maybe the flow seemed a little different than others that ive read, but either way the message was clear and easy to understand. great work

I liked this poem. I could almost tell it wasn't about you because the feelings weren't as strong as your other poems, but they were explanitory. Great Job. <3

It was very self eplanitory, the flow was a little better, I think you should take the "Myself" off of the end of this stanza..

"But then someone got there before me.
A boy at school killed him self.
I cried but not for him but because
he killed him self before I could kill myself. <<
God I am so ****** up it's not funny."

lol, it wouldn't let me copy and paste this into this comment, inappropriate words.. lol Anyhow, chance that part to..

"He killed himself, before I could,"

Or something like that, the myself, myself, in the same line, because redundeant. Making is kinda of a tongue twister, lol. You're a great writer, and have alot of potential, so please don't take offence to what I am saying. Please, keep posting.
-Ally

O.k you misspelled a few things. But all in all the message you were sending out was amazing. I can relate to your friend. Well written. 4/5

This is a really good poem. It is good to know, when you are really down, to know that someone is there to help you. Great poem. 5/5

Kalee