Ahhh I hate clowns. Lol.
I have a big fear of those things.
Bad childhood expeirance don't ask. Lol.
The poem flow was good. Didn't seemed
forced. Kinda random if you ask me.
God Bless 5/5
<3Tayy^_^ily

That was a great poem, i get the meesage you were sending through it, i feel the same way. my smiles hide my frowns too.
take care,
Jade

Wow.
nice job.

Wow, very emotional,
i had to read it couple times and google some of the vocab as they were new to me.
well done

Hey,
Thank you for your comment, im sorry for the late reply, but ive been a little busy.
Anyways i have to say i really enjoyed this poem, i really liked how oyu used the clown as a mask, how theirs someone else inside their... I think its kinda a netaphor.. its osmething many of us can relate to. I like that about it. Anywyas it had a good flow, and you hada good rhyme scheme, none of the poem seemed forced. I liked the meaning behind the poem, it seems to have a lot of though in it. A really great poem. To improve i suggest you use punctuation in your work. Other then that a great read! Keep writing! xx

Wonderful poem, good structure, good concept, and planed out very well. My only comment suggesting otherwize, is that in plases the rythm seems a little off. 5/5

^_^

I liked this poem - I'm quite the joker myself. Lets see, there were a few minor things that could be changed to improve rhythm, such as:
"All I am is but an illusion"
"(these?) silly jokes I tell"
"how everything began to fall"
and the last line needs another word or two to give it the extra punch you need ^_~ tho i have no ideas for that part.

fix those things and you got yourself a 5/5!

Awh. That's sad, but a great poem. I loved the ending, quite amazing. 'Society's lame clown' < Loved it 100%
Keep it up.

This poem leaves me with a sense of sort of a masquerade. illusions and such. i really like the line, " im not an actor or an imposter" (;

Ooo I loved the end...that's really cool, its really different and different is good :) great write

I liked this poem... It reminds me of that famous painting with the crying clown. I forget what its called or who painted it though. Its amazing how much of ourselves we can hide from the world behind something as simple as make up. Wonderful poem I thought it was going to be a funny one when I read the title but this is much better than I expected. Nice work.

Oh, my. There are a lot of punctuation mistakes.. I know some authors don't care about punctuation, but GOD would it help the flow. Just a suggestion...

Anyways.
The flow was a little off for me, but the rhyming was very nice. The message and topic were absolutely amazing; I really enjoyed this piece. Thank you for sharing.

[[If you add punctuation, I'll put you in the running for the weekly contest.. Sorry, punctuation is a big thing for me. =/]]

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

This gentle one speaking now
Is just an act{;} a show for you{.}
A costume of deceit and lies{;}
Covering up what inside is true...

Everything about me is an illusion,
Starting with the joy I bring,
Through the smiles I make,
And all the laughter I sing{.}

Behind my big, red nose
Hides a face full of fear,
I spray myself with water{,}
So you can't see my tears{.}

The silly jokes I tell
Aren't really jokes at all.
They're a story of my life
And how everything began to fall.

I'm not an actor or an imposter {--}
Not a fake walking around town{.}
I'm just your average village idiot{;}
I'm society's lame clown.

That's pretty accurate on perfect punctuation. You're grammar, rocks, too! =]
If you ever need help, you are welcome to ask me to edit a poem. I love grammar [I'm a geek] so, ask any time! Just private message me. =]

xTheEcstaysofSuicidex

This was emotional poem. Many people can relate. Good choice of words. By the way, I hate clowns. It's beautiful the way ou written this poem. Good Job! 5/5

Take care,

-Sarah A.