Well, what ever part it is. I think it should be in the depression part under relationships. Just the first stanza with the use of a knife and feeling pain. It just seems suicidal with the begining. The flow was kinda off. Other than that I'll give you a 5. God bless 5/5
<3Tay^_^

I like it.
Although, there is no mystery to it.
A great poem always has that.
The flow is great. Not amazing, sorry.
I stumbled on a few words.
Poems, when being read, are just supposed to
Flow on the lips, it did in the beginning of each stanza,
But when it gets to the end,
I have to recheck what I just read
To make sure it's the correct thing.
Out of all.
I give it a 4 :]

I really liked this one. It is a great write:) Keep up the great work. I am looking forward to reading more of your poems when you post more. 5/5

Wow...
This is very sad..
I can deeply relate so that was good but it made me upset
I really enjoyed this poem and think it's amazing!
keep writing xoxo
kaila

This is great. very nice rhythm and great use of words. this poem has a lot of meaning and describes a lot of people in the world. Keep up the great writing!

Nicely written i liked it. The emotion put into this is shown...nice job! 5/5

Good poem.
I don't think its too short.
It flowed well and the emotion was shown.
Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

Well, this is one of those really sad love poems, which is really cool, because emotions are so mixed and so confused, the reader can feel them both. Good job on this one!

You did a good job on this poem. i gave it a 4/5 because it kind of had a wierd rhyming pattern but i still liked it!

This is a really good poem i love the flow of the language

xxxx alex xxx

K, well i think you should add the other half of the poem. Becuase even before i read that comment, i thought there was something missing. It kinda messes up the structure as well when you dont add the whole poem. Anyways overall i liekd the begining of this poem. I read your first stanza and wondered why this was in the love poem section of the site. Then you go on to explain why it was in the love section. The secound stanza was quite sad, and very emotional. Liked the third stanza, because it shows how you feel. Kindof tells a story. I really liekd it. Kepe writing, but i will recomment if you add the rest of the poem. Just send me a PM yeah? And im sorry i know i said ill do 2 of your poems, i dont usually read explicits. So PM me when you add another poem or soemthing please? Take acre and keep writing! xx

Wow!! i like it alot!!
and itz not short it good :)
<3
LORiSSa

Alright what to say what to say...well the flow was off a little bit in this one. The structure was good as well as your puncuation.

In this line, "And accept that your gone." the word "your" should be "you're"

Overall it was a semi decent write, keep up your hard work.

Peace, Joe