Awww, so sad and well penned.
The flow was very beautiful and
I couldn't find any mistakes at all.
You are one talented writer.
God bless 5/5
<3Tay^__^liy

It's not mysterios
You kind of say what you want to say in this poem.
The flow seems pretty rocky, though.
Like for example
Reading was okay
Then I stumble on the words because
They just don't flow as well.
But all in all.
This is very sad and thoughtful.
I give it a 5 :]

Very good write. I loved the word choice and there were some places that had a very nice flow to it. I like it:) Another 5 out of 5 from me.