Comments : Satan's Soldier

  • 12 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    I liked it.
    It flowed well.
    And was just Amazing!

    I really don't know how to explain what it made me feel.
    but well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by Louis

    Good pacing, fluency and clarity. Try skipping lines next time so that the poem doesn't look like a mass of words 5/5

  • 2 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is the true vampire poem, hehe. I love the whole poem. Are you sure you are not a real vampire?? :-) Flowed really well and for me it doesn't need to be broken into stanzas anymore. It's great as it is. Fantastic.

    • 2 years ago

      by Bradley Peter

      I had totally forgotten about this piece. Thank you for reminding me. I enjoyed re-reading it.