WOW... another amazing write!
<3

I don't like this
As much as the others you have written.
This has no mystery in it.
There's no subtle meaning,
Unless there's nothing I can see.
So for that.
I will give you a 4/5 :]

Goodpoem. if i could spell i would critize all ur spelling misttakes too ;)

And in her vivid blue eyes, the world still turns,
Masking her sincerity, her lesson is learned.
Excellent poem, very nice flow and it was a heartfelt poem great job,love your style ~~5/5
thanks for sharing your friend Tracy