So amazing poem about man who would sacrify themselves for the one they love.. and usually they aren't notect... It touched me.. Keep up the great work!

The idea presented here is unique Dave. One-sided love is like being tortured to see the other happy. I think everyone can relate to that. The poem itself flows very nicely and I love the word choice. It's very sad yet it's the subtle things that make the poem great. 5/5

.:Danielle:.

You are a hero