Comments : Miracles Shrouded In Evil

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wow....you really have awesome writing skills! The imagery and word choices in this poem are excellent.

    Satan spews his poison
    He wills day to night
    Miracles he shrouds in evil
    Humanity basked in blight

    Loved the ending :)
    Keep up the excellent work!
    Take Care Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Nicely written dark poem....enjoyed it...5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    They tell of things to come
    For-biding me to speak
    Paralyze my arms and legs
    The culling of the meek

    i wonder how you imagine such things...its scary...but u keep writing

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent poem, very deep and full of meaning. You showed a good sense of vocabulary. Keep it up.