In the first stanza.
There are a lot of questions
But no question marks.
Maybe you can change that?
There is no air of mystery to it.
That could be great on it's own.
It's not subtle but it is strong.
I like it.
4/5?

Like she sed ^ change the punctuation. but other than that, i like it, i can understand what u are talking about and can relate in a way, i know a few people that are the same way, but anyways. gj and keep up the good work 5/5

Nice poem...like the previus comment...change th puctuations..otherwise its a beautiful work!kp writing!

"over the past two we grown"
^ should be we've.

You did a good job with this poem. I can relate to this, and I'm sure others can as well. The feeling portrayed was a bit iffy, it wasn't completely descriptive, which actually helped though Because, it's easier to relate to when the descriptions don't go into great detail.

I have some distant friends. Sometimes thigns like that have happened to me. So i can relate to this 5/5 good job!

I can relate to this poem. The punctuation does need to be fixed, the flow was slightly off, but not all need to flow. =) Nice work, continue writing!
-Ally

I like it. I don't care too much about puction, but anyway the flow was a little off, but the word choice was good, and the emtions were strong and clear. 4/5

I liked it, there was such emotion for it, it was a nice read, 5/5

This was something that most people can relate to it.. but the poem was kind of awkward at the end .. it just probably me .. and at the beginning of the poem there was tons o fquestions.. but no questions mark.. and there was grammical errors.. no biggie.. but becasue of all your effort you put into this I GIVE you 4/5

Wow. i can really relate to this. me and my best friend of 7 years stopped talking about a year ago. but you know what, i realized it was for the better. i have a new best friend and she's amazing. don't know how i went all these years without her. the thing with friends... even when you find out one isn't really a friend, there's another there who will prove ot you how much their friendship means.

take care!

Let's distant and I'll find someone
else to talk to because you don't care.

With the light of this line, I would say that you have nicely used descriptive grammar. Especially the word "distant" is apparent. I gave you 5/5 dear for this true piece of friendship.

This is sucha heartfelt poem. i really liked it. It made me think about friend i lost when i was younger. :( nice work hun

xxx alex xxx