The words flowed together like music!
It was absolutly beautiful!
I really don't know how to describe how much I like it
other then I do!!

Awe such a sweet poem. I really like it because I have a friend just like that and a brother. This poem also has great rhythm. Another 5 out of 5.

Aww. That was so cute! You must really love your brother! The rhyme and flow of this poem is spectacular! There's just a few typos and spelling errors but who cares! The poetry must've really been flowing! Great job!

This was a really sweet poem, it was very calm and very relaxing to read. Nothing too intense, so it was enjoyable. Very good job on this.

Awesome! This was pure beauty and unique expression, I can totally relate this although with a close friend of mine i label my sister. the flow seemed perfect 5/5

I loved the flow and structure within this poem. Very nicely penned.

The 3rd stanza 5th line, "I live" should be on the next line.

Other than that small error, this was a great write. I enjoyed the read.

Peace, Joe